100 word challenge- The Death Castle

I whimpered for Jack, my brother, as I crept towards the smoky air that lead ahead of me. As I continued, I whimpered again, but not because I was scared, but because there was a deafening screech that made my ear drum echo as they bounced. There I saw something lurking ahead of me, something urging me towards it, something staring straight at me!

I stayed and fixated my eyes at it, it praying it did not see me. It looked at me again and gestured me to come closer. I refused. Big mistake. It became quite. Too quite. 


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