Show not tell (Atomic)

The Head teacher glared at the destroyed school with her mouth  wide open. Aunt Sandwich twitched her head rapidly left and right.  .  Tommy ground  his teeth and said ” I think i know who  did this” then they both shouted “MUM!”  Soon they saw there mum Madame Malice walking away from their school.


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