Show not tell (Atomic)

The headteacher, who opened her mouth wide and glared with terror looking at the demolished, destroyed school, fainted in horror. As Miss Crackdown clenched her fisits, she stomped away from school in  a big anger on her face.Tommy with eyes wide stared at the remains of the school with a big grin.The headteacher glared at the destroyed school with her mouth wide open.Aunt sandwich twiched  her head rapidly left and right.

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