I am using DAD for this pharagraph about the bear and the hare John Lewis Christmas advert.

 

 

In a forest full of life there was a gingerish,brownish bear ,who was best friends with a pale grey hare . The hare rode on the bear’s back . Slowly the bear rotated his head upward and the hare slid off. A single snow flake fell onto his nose. “Whats wrong,” questioned the hare.

“I…..I have to get ready to hibernate,” wimpered the bear.

“But you promised you would stay and not hibernate this year”moned  the hare

” I know but it is my animal instincts,”  said the bear in a anxious manor.

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