The bear and the hare

Today, Year 5 have written the opening for The Bear and the Hare advert.  They have thought about DAD, using description, action and dialogue in their writing.  The children have tried to create a picture in the reader’s mind.

To read their fantastic writing, please look on the Year 5 page or search for Bear and Hare.

We hope you enjoy reading their writing and we would really like some comments.

Thank you.

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