5 sentence challenge

When I was walking in the park with my mum I saw a beautiful,big town.I asked my mum if I could go there and she said yes.We went to the boats to sail with the ducks and there beautiful,cute chicks.Next we went inside the big,gianourmes towers.When we were near the grass I saw some people having a picnic, so I asked my mum “can we have a picnic when we go again”? and she said yes.

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